Gary Clark

Gary Clark

About

Fiction is not my only venture into the word of writing.  I have been writing commercial copy for over20 years.  As a copywriter and commercialwriter, my writing spans a variety of venues from Marketing and BusinessConsulting, to technical writer and Adult education instructor in SmallBusiness.  My business website is http://Write4Me.net   and my writing website is http://GAClark.com .

I have written other self published ‘how-to’ e-books – one onProfessional Selling entitled  “ThePerfect Profession” another on “Writing Copy as a Career,” and another onwriting structure for managers & professionals, entitled “Writing to beRead.” 

In addition to the writing articles, ghost writing, web content andmarketing copy for my clients, I have authored numerous articles on businessdevelopment and business marketing available at:

Ezine Articles http://ezinearticles.com/?expert=Gary_A._Clark  and

Article Base  http://www.articlesbase.com/authors/gary-clark/200419.htm

 

Through the Eyes of Maria: Choices

Through the Eyes of Maria: Choices

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<p>Maria hits the streets of New York in search of the love denied by her alcoholic father and indifferent mother. When Sergio, a dark, worldly stranger, lures her with diamonds, brand-name clothing, and undivided attention, Maria sees a way out of her dysfunctional home. Seduced by Sergio’s charm and the promise of wealth and recognition, Maria ignores her panicked intuition and wanders into his lair.<br /><br />But in a world where ambition and deception go hand in hand, where dreams are shattered and innocence crushed, Maria discovers she’s trapped in a hell much worse than the one she left. And now, there is no escape. The price for betrayal is blood.<br /><br />Destiny intervenes when Maria meets Christian, a handsome law student haunted by a dark family secret. With her life at risk and time running out, will Maria find the strength to save herself and convince Christian to go against all reason and risk everything to help her?</p>

Story Behind The Book

I started writing in the late 80’s writing poetry. The poetry of Rod McKuen caught my attention and influenced my writing style. Poetry doesn’t make money however, but the brevity of the genre and the media translates well into commercial writing. By “painting pictures with words,” I laid the groundwork for the success I have in the business of writing for other people. The original Vince Roberts / Hitchhiker saga was in an unpublished poem I wrote in 1988 entitled ‘The Hitchhiker’. The premise and the story stayed with me throughout the years and last year, I gave the original poem a bolder story line and a wider persona. Using The Hitchhiker poem as my outline, Show Low is my cornerstone novel of the Vince Roberts Series. You can read the original poem in Flash Format here: http://www.gaclark.com/TheHitchhiker.htm

Reviews

<p style="line-height:normal;text-indent:27pt;margin-bottom:0pt;" class="MsoNormal">I'm really enjoying your story so far.<span>  </span>The opening 'conversation' (with your sister) is brilliant and sets the story going.<span>  </span>I liked the part with the rat.<span>  </span>(the smell of '...wet fur and crap)<span>  </span>Great description of the storm and Vince's uncomfortable predicament.<span>  </span>In chapter two we find out about your sister and you playing together, lonely because your folks are in politics and haven't time for you.<span>  </span>You make up your own realities and are very close.<span>  </span>We are left wanting to join you (despite knowledge of the rat!)<span>  </span>A really excellent piece of work.<span>  </span>I shall read more.<span>  </span>Backed with pleasure,<span>  </span>Barry Wenlock – “Little Krisna and The Bihar Boys” <br />------</p> <p style="line-height:normal;text-indent:27pt;margin-bottom:0pt;" class="MsoNormal">I felt very acquainted with Vince and it's very interesting how he still uses his survival skills when he's back in the U.S. Good scene with the rat.<span>  </span>His concentration was a fine method for introducing his childhood, the environs there and his engagement.<span>  </span>The style is agile and it kept me reading with the details.<span>  </span>Sounds like a compelling plot!<span>  </span>Katherine Holmes “The Swan Bonnet”<br />------</p> <p style="line-height:normal;text-indent:27pt;margin-bottom:0pt;" class="MsoNormal">Not just a classical addition to the genre of romance but one that is written to a much higher, much more literary fiction level, than I would normally expect.<span>  </span>Excellent fare.<span>  </span>Andrew Skaife<br />------</p> <p style="line-height:normal;text-indent:27pt;margin-bottom:0pt;" class="MsoNormal">You have written a very interesting storyline and created a most memorable character in Vince.<span>  </span>The Prologue set the tone for your story nicely and the dialogue is well written.<span>  </span>The pace of your book flows well and your use of imagery is excellent.<span>  </span>The dream sequence is well done and all of this coupled with your descriptive writing makes your romantic mystery a pleasure to read.<span>  </span>Andrew Burans – “The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning”<br />------</p> <p style="line-height:normal;text-indent:27pt;margin-bottom:0pt;" class="MsoNormal">One of the earlier reviewers of my work on the site said that agents/publishers would pan it because I had opened with dialogue.<span>  </span>Didn't explain why or offer any substantiation.<span>  </span>However, based on the opening of this book alone I'm backing it.<span>  </span>With the obvious and deliberate intent of stimulating the reader's inquisitiveness and motivation to read further the dialogue is touching, sensitive, provides the optimum patina of mystique and achieves this aim brilliantly.<span>  </span>Robert Davidson.<span>  </span>“The Tuzla Run” <br />-----</p> <p style="line-height:normal;text-indent:27pt;margin-bottom:0pt;" class="MsoNormal">GA, I read the first two sections.<span>  </span>They say either you have it or you don't.<span>  </span>You definitely have writing talent, my friend.<span>  </span>Good narrative and true-to-life dialogue.<span>  </span>Joffrey<span>  </span>“The Silver Spoon Effect” <br />-------</p> <p style="line-height:normal;text-indent:27pt;margin-bottom:0pt;" class="MsoNormal">I love this - reads like a movie - so polished and well written threaded with humor and romance.<span>  </span>I think this is one I'd buy based on the pitch and it would not disappoint after I read the first three chapters –<span>  </span>Liz – “The Cheech Room” <br />------</p> <p style="line-height:normal;text-indent:27pt;margin-bottom:0pt;" class="MsoNormal">This is an exciting, fast moving story, and Vince is an unusual character who attracts us straightaway.<span>  </span>His meeting with the truck driver, Alex, is fascinating, and promises a lot more excitement.<span>  </span>You give us Vince's background easily through his thoughts, and by showing us some of the things which have happened to him.<span>  </span>The scene where he is crouching in the hole, hiding from the weather, staring at the angry rat, is excellent, vividly brought to life with lots of detail.<span>  </span>I was hooked by your opening, and am still eager to know what was going on in that conversation, so I'll need to read more.<span>  </span>The hook at the end of Chapter Four is another sure draw.<span>  </span>Your writing is clear and fluent.<span>  </span>Gerry McCullough, “Belfast Girls.” <br />------</p>