Marshall Thornton

Marshall Thornton

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Marshall Thornton is an award-winning screenwriter, playwright and author living in Long Beach, California. He has an MFA in screenwriting from UCLA where he won the Carl David Memorial Fellowship for his romantic-comedy, Husband Material, as well as a BA in Creative Writing from California State University at Long Beach. He has had plays produced in both Chicago and Los Angeles. Marshall has published in literary journals and is currently exploring the world of on-line downloadable fiction.

Peter and the Whimper Whineys Coloring Book

Peter and the Whimper Whineys Coloring Book

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<p><span style="color:rgb(24,24,24);font-family:Merriweather, Georgia, serif;font-size:14px;">This coloring book version of the best-selling “whine-stopper” children’s story was designed for kids to enjoy reading the rhyming, as well as being able to illustrate their own version of Peter’s nocturnal adventure into the woods.</span><br style="color:rgb(24,24,24);font-family:Merriweather, Georgia, serif;font-size:14px;" /><br style="color:rgb(24,24,24);font-family:Merriweather, Georgia, serif;font-size:14px;" /><span style="color:rgb(24,24,24);font-family:Merriweather, Georgia, serif;font-size:14px;">Peter’s mother warns him that if he doesn’t stop whining and crying, he’ll have to go live with the Whimper-Whineys. His adventure continues as he later hops into the woods and finds lots of frightening Whimper-Whineymen! He discovers that the Whimper-Whineys are very ill-mannered and rude, and that everything is sour in Whimper-Whineland. He decides his mother was right. If only he can get back home!</span><br style="color:rgb(24,24,24);font-family:Merriweather, Georgia, serif;font-size:14px;" /><br style="color:rgb(24,24,24);font-family:Merriweather, Georgia, serif;font-size:14px;" /><span style="color:rgb(24,24,24);font-family:Merriweather, Georgia, serif;font-size:14px;">According to a recent critique, “I cannot imagine any parent or guardian not wanting to read this book to their child! ... Parents everywhere applaud you!”</span></p>

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<span style="font-family:'Trebuchet MS', Verdana, sans-serif;line-height:normal;font-size:14px;color:#02171d;"></span><p style="margin-bottom:1.5em;line-height:1.5em;">From Rainbow Reviews, British Bulldog</p><p style="margin-bottom:1.5em;line-height:1.5em;">In the first story, &quot;Little Boy Found,&quot; we really get to know Nick. At first I can’t say I particularly liked him. He was promiscuous and seemed rather uncaring about everyone other than himself. Also he smokes. But Thornton’s excellent storytelling had me soon reconsidering. The “boy” who was found in this story was Brian. I liked how once Nick’s conscience tugged at him, he went above and beyond to watch over Brian.</p><p style="margin-bottom:1.5em;line-height:1.5em;">I wouldn’t go as far as to say Nick is a protector, even though he’s a former cop. But he certainly came alive and three-dimensional in this opening story.</p><p style="margin-bottom:1.5em;line-height:1.5em;">&quot;Little Boy Burned&quot; sees Nick being woken in the early morning to begin investigating a fire at Paradise Isle, a gay nightclub where Nick works the door two nights a week. The “boy burned” is Bernie, one of the bartenders.</p><p style="margin-bottom:1.5em;line-height:1.5em;">Thornton gives us bits of information, such as the coat his friend Ross wears, the garment actually belonging to Nick. Such information doesn’t advance the plot but it helps paint the scene, even tells us a little about both Nick and Ross. Such attention to detail raises Thornton’s writing above the average.</p><p style="margin-bottom:1.5em;line-height:1.5em;">I still got irritated with Nick. He rarely keeps in touch with Brian from the first story, and when Brian comes over to cook him a meal, he has to first wash Nick’s frying pan that was put away dirty. Again, such details aren’t designed to advance the plot, but say much about the lives of the characters.</p><p style="margin-bottom:1.5em;line-height:1.5em;">I enjoy mysteries, but rarely can work out whodunit prior to the truth being revealed. In fact, if I can solve the case then it’s usually because the author has done a poor job. I was unable to determine for myself who had torched the Paradise Isle. So well done, Mr. Thornton.</p><p style="margin-bottom:1.5em;line-height:1.5em;">Nick’s front door continues to revolve as his sex partners enter and exit. Pity he can’t seem to just stick to one. My favourite in this second story was Hank, a fireman. I don’t think I’ve got a uniform fetish, but I’d have to do more practical research before being able to say for certain.</p><p style="margin-bottom:1.5em;line-height:1.5em;">&quot;Little Boy Fallen&quot; sees Lenny, a seemingly happy young man with plenty to live for suddenly fall from a seventh story balcony. The cops seem to think it's suicide and close the case. Lenny's mother isn't so sure, so hires Nick to investigate.</p><p style="margin-bottom:1.5em;line-height:1.5em;">This third story was just as edge-of-the-seat enjoyable as the previous two. If I were Nick I'd avoid heights as much as possible as he does seem to experience dramatic moments atop them. Most pleasing of all to me about this story was the hope that Nick finally finds his true love, but the story, and the book, ends before this can be explored.</p><p style="margin-bottom:1.5em;line-height:1.5em;">Thornton does a first-class job of getting the reader centred in the Chicago of the early '80s. The locations feel right, the descriptions of pre-HIV unsafe sex practices, police and societal attitudes toward homosexuality, plus news events of the era, all help set the scene.</p><p style="margin-bottom:1.5em;line-height:1.5em;">I sincerely hope the author will revisit Nick Nowak in future books. I'll be sure to buy them on the strength of these three stories.</p>