I cheated. I read a couple of chapters and
then jumped to chapters 10, 11, 12. My cell phone rang and I literally
jumped completely out of my skin. Thanks for the spook! Your writing
flows. I felt like I was watching it! Great job. Backed.
I said I'd get back with some thought, so
here goes -
Fantastic.
It had the feel of a Silent Hill
game to it, which I really like. A kind of survival horror book. I read a
lot of horror, and there's not much of it that's actually any good.
This is, though. This is really good.
I'm going to stop shy of
giving you a big head. It was well worth the shelf time. If you'd get
any more points for another shelving, I'd do it.
Honestly, I
don't know if this will make it to the top, because I think this site is
skewed in favour of lit fiction, but personally, I'd buy it.
OK,
going to stop now. I read to chapter five, enjoyed every minute of it.
I'm
leaving it there, but I'm keeping it in my WL because I fully intend to
come back to it.
Best of luck,
Craig
I read the last two chapters and was totally drawn in although I had no idea what in the hell was going on. Chapter 16 was absolutely great. You have a wonderful way of describing a scene that brings the reader right into the story. I need to go back and read the other chapters, but this is really well done. You had me from whore pretended to writhe in ecstasy to Andy died screaming.
This is a fine piece of work, Declan. I'm into it right away. Very cinematic. The makings of a classic piece of southern redneck horror? Anyway, I'm getting drawn into it. W/Led it and yep, I'm a-gonna back it. The dialogue is sharp and the characters back stories look set to be very interesting before the action pulls me in. 'DIME?' Worth more than a fistful of dollars more like
I love books that make me feel so on edge as this. It's like some sort of secret pleasure; I can't stand it but I can't stop it either. Your writing is very visual and engaging, which adds to the tension. Very well done, and one destined for success.
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A well written read that cranks the tension with every new paragraph. Characters and dialogue sits well against a cracking fizzing plot that keeps the adrenalin rushing. Shelved.